This is the class that I think Iāve put the most work into. Hereās the feedback I got from my tutor:
Oakās work on Mill has been stellar. She writes extremely sophisticated philosophical prose at the level of a good graduate student. The only issue is that occasionally she tries to pack in too much in too short a space, leading to unclarity. By the end of our four sessions, after I had warned her of this, it looked like she had overcome this tendency; but she would still be well advised to bear this issue in mind.
Funny story: it only looked like I overcame that tendency because, after I finished my last essay, I decided to go through and rewrite the entire thing to make it move as slowly as possible. You can see both versions below.
I got an 80 on my collections essay for moral philosophy, which Iām quite proud of; it was largely on material from the Week 3 essay, with some more discussion of moral motivation (drawing from Kaganās Limits of Morality).
Week 1: Millās Principle
Was Mill an advocate of act utilitarianism or rule utilitarianism? Which one is better?
I take it that this question was intended, at least in part, to emphasize the distinction between multi-level act utilitarianism and genuine rule utilitarianism (as these are popularly conflated). But, surprisingly, Mill does seem to be a rule-utilitarian after all! Today, I would at the very least reword some of the discussion of act versus rule utilitarianism, which I think is slightly misguided. For instance, the best argument for expected-value consequentialism isnāt that it avoids uncertainty (it doesnāt), but just by extensional adequacy (see here for some discussion).
Week 3: Higher Pleasures
Does Millās distinction between higher and lower pleasures achieve what he wants it to achieve?
I think some of the symmetry discussion, like a lot of discussion of skepticism in general, is too dialectically-minded. People can know what the higher pleasures are, even if they canāt convince their opponents. However, there might still be a problem of making the higher pleasures depend on peoplesā judgments (āwhat makes one pleasure more valuable than anotherā), rather than taking these judgments as merely indicating what the objectively higher pleasures are. Also, note that the transfinite ordinal scale isnāt really needed (as with slightly less naive utility functions we can represent welfare levels with just the reals).
Week 5: Justice & Rights
Is Millās utilitarianism capable of satisfying our intuitions about justice and rights? If not, does it matter?
Since writing, Iāve become much more sympathetic to a sort of objective-list theory, and slightly less sympathetic to sophisticated subjectivism (think Railton); so, Iād probably change some of the wording / framing. But I do think that consequentialism more broadly isnāt as counterintuitive as youād initially think! Obviously, thereās the worry that consequentialists may pursue a degenerating research program of adding epicycles to accommodate unfriendly intuitions (something like this, I think, is a problem with sophisticated subjectivisms). But I donāt think this holds.
Week 7: Moral Intuitions
Is it a problem for a normative ethical theory if it is in conflict with widely felt moral intuitions?
This essay was rewritten from scratch before submitting, to make it move much more slowly. I might put up the original version, too, so you can see the contrast. Iām not sure how large a distinction there is between the natural and the normative: for instance, I donāt think thereās any deep distinction between natural and normative facts: we may understand both as just sets of possible worlds that include the actual world (see Williamson). Thereās also a bit more to say about moral dilemmas. For instance, if we accept (a) that ought(X) implies can(X), and (b) that ought(X) and ought(Y) imply ought(X and Y), then there are no moral dilemmas (Amos Wollen mentioned this to me). (Assume for sake of contradiction that thereās some X such that ought(X) and ought(not X). Then by (b) we have ought(X and not X), and so by (a) we have can(X and not X), which is a contradiction.) Also, we might understand individual inconsistency on the model of collective disagreement, such that inconsistency is just self-disagreement; this lets us treat things like inconsistent intuitions a bit more nicely (see Kodsi).
Hereās the original draft.